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Holt doesn't aim to successfully portray the trials and difficulties Turing experienced during his lifetime. Holt wants the reader to see past Turing’s homosexuality. He aims to showcase all of Turing’s successes.  Holt’s tone states that he wants to give the proper acknowledgment to Turing for his accomplishments. He speaks to Turing’s mysterious death and secret homosexuality to engage the reader, then follows by writing, “[a]nother [secret], however, had not come to light” his achievements such as, breaking the German Enigma code and creating the blueprint for the modern computer. Holt says that biographies and broadways “gave a lucid account of his technical achievement” (344) but “gets wrong the central idea of a ‘computable number’” (344). These examples imply that his primary focus is to shed light on Turing’s achievements, not his homosexuality.

Holt only mentions Turing’s death and homosexuality to engage the reader. Holt does not do so to engage the reader to think about what life was like for gay men at the time. The essay is not called, “What Life was like for Gay Men in 1900’s” it is called “Code-Breaker”.  Any good writer knows, the first few sentences are vital in intriguing your audience. This is why Holt begins his essay by including the mysterious “death by poison apple” and “gross indecency” (337).

As a writer Holt understands that there are certain procedures to follow in order to engage a reader. He uses this knowledge to engage the reader but not to portray Turing’s difficulties but rather to shed light on his achievements. Holt speaks to Turing’s homosexuality and death only to dismiss the idea that this information is relevant when speaking to a man who “solved the most important logic problem of his time, saved the countless lives by defeating a Nazi code, conceived the computer, and rethought how mind arises from matter” (346). 

Jenifer Turpin's essay, “Women Confronting War” effectively engages the audience and pulls them in to gain a deeper understanding of the effect that war has on women. Turpin’s topic is something that most would not think about; when most people think of war they instantly think of the classic male soldier and how it affects him. To write from the angle of how war affects women is something that instantly engages the reader. The topics of the Turpin’s essay are extreme and brutal. The essay is well structured and the arguments are fast and straight to the point. Turpin uses this rhetoric to engage and support her argument that, “[w]omen suffer from war in many ways, including, dying, experiencing sexual abuse and torture and losing loved ones, homes and communities” (325).

Every line is meant to give the audience the information to gain an understanding of Turpin’s argument. Under the header, Women as Direct Casualties, Turpin references Hauchler and Kennedy saying that “[w]omen and their children continue to be the vast majority of these civilian casualties” (325) speaking to the 90% of civilian casualties in 1990 due to war (325). Under Women as War Refugees, Turpin says that, “[b]y the end of 1992 more than 46 million people had lost their homes; about 36 million of these were women and girls” (325). This information is both shocking and factual.

The headers alone pull on the heartstrings of the audience. When Turpin speaks to Wartime and Sexual Violence Against Women, she stresses that none of the women affected by war are safe from rape and prostitution. Turpin elaborates that, “being young and pretty has very little to do with becoming a victim of wartime rape” (326) because there are also many cases where elderly women have been raped due to their vulnerability (326). Turpin addresses the “psychological torture” (326) that occurs when rape results in pregnancy by explaining, “women may be shunned by their own families and communities, viewed as tainted, worthless ‘property’” (326). The thought of experiencing rape and not having your family for support is heart-wrenching.

Making sure that every line begs, “tell me more” Turpin changes the topic to prostitution. She explains “[w]artime prostitution may be either physically forced or economically coerced” (327). Young women, orphaned and non-orphaned girls often turn to this as a way to provide for themselves and their families. Turpin concludes by speaking of Wartime Domestic Violence. She acknowledges the increase in women that are abused physically and sexually in their own homes. Women suffer from wartime domestic violence not just from their husbands but often from their sons. Turpin makes each sentence count towards educating her audience on the many ways in which women are affected by war.